I think that what you said was very reasonable. However, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not suggesting your information isn't solid, but suppose you added something that grabbed folk's attention? I mean はてるまが行く！ ... VISA取得行脚。 is a little plain. You could look at Yahoo's home page and see how they create post titles to get people to open the links. You might try adding a video or a picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little livelier.